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[禁忌之恋] 【美母为妻】6-10,纯爱李文(作者授权代发)

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凡事都有个过程,尤其是良家堕落的过程。建议大大在写作过程中可欲擒故纵,通过对比女主人公内心的不同声音和冲动,突显她内心的挣扎。例如,一方面是她对某个决定的渴望,另一方面是对这个决定可能带来后果的恐惧。多设置这些对比鲜明的情感和想法,可以让读者更深刻地感受到女人的矛盾和焦虑,更加引人入胜。一家之言,谨供大大参考。
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